• clear
• focused
• structure - 1 paragraph = 1 idea
  • “funnel introduction” - goes from more general to more specific

• elementary school textbook
• Not well written, difficult to understand, overcomplicated, unnecessary information

• Yes
  • Shouldn’t be too complex or too simple
• Supervizor, people marking it (reviewer), students, academics, people interested in the topic
  • bachelor’s thesis is Supervisor biding
  • defense committee who haven’t read the thesis
  • best thesis defense is good thesis offense https://xkcd.com/1403/
• Start: layout the structure - outline
  • The proper formatting for thesis from start

• Missing explanation for acronyms
• First sentence repeats title
• Carefully designed - whats the opposite

• Bad conclusion
• Good summary

• situation: 1-3
• problem: 4-7 = However
• solution: 8-11 = Given this uncertainty,
• evaluation: 12

SVOMP

• Subject
• Verb
• Object
• adverbs
  • Manner
  • Place
  • Time